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  • Looking for proofreaders!

    From Arelor@77:1/100 to All on Fri Apr 17 03:57:00 2020
    Hello!

    I have written some short stories as of late. I have one that is a rough draft at this point and I would like somebody to read it and give me an opinion. If you want to read some fun Science-Fiction that touches some current social issues without being pa

    Cheers!
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  • From Netsurge@77:1/100 to Arelor on Fri Apr 17 11:11:28 2020
    I have written some short stories as of late. I have one that is a rough draft at this point and I would like somebody to read it and give me an opinion. If you want to read some fun Science-Fiction that touches some current social issues without being pa

    I'm always up to read some science fiction.

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  • From Arelor@77:1/100 to All on Mon Apr 27 07:36:00 2020
    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to All on Fri Apr 17 2020 03:57 am

    Hello!

    I have written some short stories as of late. I have one that is a rough dra at this point and I would like somebody to read it and give me an opinion. I you want to read some fun Science-Fiction that touches some current social issues without being partisan, just drop a line here.

    Cheers!

    No responses :( My marketing must be really bad.
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  • From calcmandan@77:1/110 to Arelor on Mon Apr 27 16:02:00 2020
    Arelor wrote to All <=-

    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to All on Fri
    Apr 17 2020 03:57 am

    Hello!

    I have written some short stories as of late. I have one that is a rough dra at this point and I would like somebody to read it and give me an opinion. I you want to read some fun Science-Fiction that touches some current social issues without being partisan, just drop a line here.

    Cheers!

    No responses :( My marketing must be really bad.

    Sorry, I thought I had. I'll proofread for you. I don't mind as long as you're okay with honest feedback.


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  • From Dumas Walker@77:1/115 to ARELOR on Mon Apr 27 18:45:00 2020
    Hello!

    I have written some short stories as of late. I have one that is a rough dra >> at this point and I would like somebody to read it and give me an opinion. I >> you want to read some fun Science-Fiction that touches some current social >> issues without being partisan, just drop a line here.

    Cheers!

    No responses :( My marketing must be really bad.

    I thought someone did respond. I would also be interested in reading it.

    Thanks!


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  • From Ogg@77:1/119 to Arelor on Mon May 4 10:09:44 2020
    On 4/17/2020 3:57 AM, between "Arelor":

    I have written some short stories as of late. I have one that is a rough draft
    at this point and I would like somebody to read it and give me an opinion. If
    you want to read some fun Science-Fiction that touches some current social issues without being pa

    I could give it a go if you like. I rather enjoy scifi.
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  • From R4bb17@77:1/100 to Arelor on Sat May 9 13:31:00 2020
    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to All on Mon Apr 27 2020 07:36 am

    No responses :( My marketing must be really bad.
    No, it's not. You just chose a little wrong place to look for an audience. BBS isn't very popular nowadays^^

    But I'd like to read some short stories in my free time. If you don't mind, of course...

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  • From Arelor@77:1/100 to R4bb17 on Sun May 10 11:46:00 2020
    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: R4bb17 to Arelor on Sat May 09 2020 01:31 pm

    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to All on Mon Apr 27 2020 07:36 am

    No responses :( My marketing must be really bad.
    No, it's not. You just chose a little wrong place to look for an audience. B isn't very popular nowadays^^

    But I'd like to read some short stories in my free time. If you don't mind, course...

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    Hello!

    If you are the one who sent me a priv email, I have answered you with a link and a password. Have fun!
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  • From R4bb17@77:1/100 to Arelor on Sun May 10 13:03:00 2020
    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to R4bb17 on Sun May 10 2020 11:46 am

    If you are the one who sent me a priv email, I have answered you with a link and a password. Have fun!
    No, I didn't send you anything. I afraid you gave it to thedifferent person._.

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  • From Ogg@77:1/119 to Arelor on Sun May 10 17:50:04 2020
    On 5/10/2020 11:46 AM, between "Arelor":All

    If you are the one who sent me a priv email, I have answered you with a link and a password. Have fun!

    Thank you. Got it.

    Meanwhile, there were several others here interested as well:

    Netsurge
    calmandan
    Dumas Walker
    rabbit ? (R4bb17)
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  • From R4bb17@77:1/100 to Arelor on Thu May 21 11:45:00 2020
    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to R4bb17 on Sun May 10 2020 11:46 am

    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: R4bb17 to Arelor on Sat May 09 2020 01:31 pm
    If you are the one who sent me a priv email, I have answered you with a link and a password. Have fun!
    Dude?

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  • From Arelor@77:1/100 to R4bb17 on Sat May 23 05:17:00 2020
    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: R4bb17 to Arelor on Thu May 21 2020 11:45 am

    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to R4bb17 on Sun May 10 2020 11:46 am

    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: R4bb17 to Arelor on Sat May 09 2020 01:31 pm
    If you are the one who sent me a priv email, I have answered you with a l
    and a password. Have fun!
    Dude?

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    Didn't you get the mail? Do you want me to send it over again?
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  • From R4bb17@77:1/100 to Arelor on Mon Jun 1 13:14:00 2020
    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to R4bb17 on Sat May 23 2020 05:17 am

    Didn't you get the mail? Do you want me to send it over again?
    Sure!^^

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  • From Arelor@77:1/100 to R4bb17 on Mon Jun 1 16:01:00 2020
    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: R4bb17 to Arelor on Mon Jun 01 2020 01:14 pm

    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to R4bb17 on Sat May 23 2020 05:17 am

    Didn't you get the mail? Do you want me to send it over again?
    Sure!^^

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    I tried again.

    If it does not show up in your INBOX, maybe it is in your spam folder?
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  • From Arelor@77:1/100 to R4bb17 on Mon Jun 1 16:01:00 2020
    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: R4bb17 to Arelor on Mon Jun 01 2020 01:14 pm

    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to R4bb17 on Sat May 23 2020 05:17 am

    Didn't you get the mail? Do you want me to send it over again?
    Sure!^^

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    Also, if it does not work this time I will try sending you the link using a different email address.
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  • From R4bb17@77:1/100 to Arelor on Tue Jun 2 07:15:00 2020
    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to R4bb17 on Mon Jun 01 2020 04:01 pm

    I tried again.

    If it does not show up in your INBOX, maybe it is in your spam folder?
    Got it this time, will read your stories soon^^

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  • From Arelor@77:1/100 to R4bb17 on Tue Jun 2 14:05:00 2020
    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: R4bb17 to Arelor on Tue Jun 02 2020 07:15 am

    Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Arelor to R4bb17 on Mon Jun 01 2020 04:01 pm

    I tried again.

    If it does not show up in your INBOX, maybe it is in your spam folder?
    Got it this time, will read your stories soon^^

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    Awesome! I hope you like them
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  • From Arelor@77:1/114 to Ogg on Fri Aug 28 17:17:34 2020
    Re: Re: Looking for proofreaders!
    By: Ogg to Arelor on Sun May 10 2020 05:50 pm

    On 5/10/2020 11:46 AM, between "Arelor":All

    If you are the one who sent me a priv email, I have answered you with a li and a password. Have fun!

    Thank you. Got it.

    Meanwhile, there were several others here interested as well:

    Netsurge
    calmandan
    Dumas Walker
    rabbit ? (R4bb17)

    I think I have mentioned somewhere else, but an actual editor with respectable connections has shown interest in these stories after reading some, and has asked for the rest.

    Maybe it will end up in a deal.

    Thanks everybody!

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  • From Shitty@77:1/142 to Arelor on Mon Apr 27 10:14:26 2020
    No responses :( My marketing must be really bad.

    Send it to Netsurge! I think he said a few messages back that he's into
    Sci-Fi. If he reviews it for you, his opinion could be quite valuable.

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