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    From Denis Mosko@2:5064/54.1315 to All on Sun Oct 11 21:10:02 2020
    Lovely 3 bedroom apartment located in City, tourist area near River, area SUPERMARKET. All infrastructure and amenities are close by. Total covered area of flat is 20, fully renovated. Apartment features bedroom, living room with open-plan kitchen, bathroom and a shower, balcony, River view. Apartment is furnished and washing machine is installed throughout. Covered parking.

    Is it ok?

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  • From August Abolins@2:221/360 to Denis Mosko on Wed Oct 14 16:55:03 2020
    On 11/10/2020 2:10 p.m., Denis Mosko : All wrote:



    Lovely 3 bedroom apartment located in City, tourist area
    near River, area SUPERMARKET. All infrastructure and
    amenities are close by. Total covered area of flat is 20,
    fully renovated. Apartment features bedroom, living room
    with open-plan kitchen, bathroom and a shower, balcony,
    River view. Apartment is furnished and washing machine is
    installed throughout. Covered parking.

    Is it ok?

    The most glaring problem would be this sentence:

    "Apartment is furnished and washing machine is
    installed throughout."


    I'd make it:

    "Apartment is fully furnished, including an in-suite washing machine."


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  • From Denis Mosko@2:5064/54.1315 to August Abolins on Wed Oct 14 20:43:50 2020
    Apartment is full furnished, includin an in-suite washing machine.

    What is "in-suite"?

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  • From August Abolins@2:221/360 to Denis Mosko on Thu Oct 15 17:18:56 2020
    On 14/10/2020 1:43 p.m., Denis Mosko : August Abolins wrote:
    Apartment is full furnished, includin an in-suite washing machine.

    What is "in-suite"?

    IN-SUITE means that it is inside the apartment.


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  • From Denis Mosko@2:5064/54.1315 to August Abolins on Thu Oct 15 20:42:40 2020
    On 14/10/2020 1:43 p.m., Denis Mosko : August Abolins wrote:
    Apartment is full furnished, includin an in-suite washing machine.
    What is "in-suite"?
    IN-SUITE means that it is inside the apartment.
    *including

    --- GoldED+/W32-MINGW 1.1.5-b20120519 (Kubik 3.0)
    * Origin: В начале было слово. В конце будет ориджин. (2:5064/54.1315)